Week 17

Once upon a time a girl named Orla who lived in a old yellow taxi. One day she went to the waterfall. She was so existed to go to the waterfall. She helve dragged her body to the waterfall. The police officer said she could not swim in the waterfall. I just  want to take a bath said Orla. I’m so sorry Orla but pranus are in these waters said the police officer. Orla wint home but wut she did not know was the police officer was filming her all the way back to her taxi. His name was tom

2 thoughts on “Week 17

  1. Hi Roz,
    Well done on your story this week. The ending of your story is really creepy, I’d love to find out what happens next. It’s exciting that you leave the reader wondering what happens.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 wc
    Dublin, Ireland

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