today is Halloween and today is my patty. I run a candy industry and it is riley busy. all the kids were afraid of my costume. tan some tang happing. a kid had red flowed going down his face. tis is vary urgent . I relist he was murderer. we all had to evacuate the blading. the pope arrived and investigating us. the cat, the ghost, and the queen. the boy was a frog. the ghost was no were to be fond. the cat was bey the frog. and the queen was in her frown. who murderer the frog boy tang.
Rozlyn,
I liked the detail you used saying the narrator runs a candy industry. It makes sense that it would be so busy as the story takes place on Halloween.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
Thank you so very much for the kind words mrs.g
Love Rozlyn